“Can you believe it?” Taylor said, intertwining her fingers with Matthew’s. “So much is happening and here we are going on our first official date?”
Matthew chuckled lightly, “First official date.” He said slowly as if finally realizing the occasion and then he smiled, thinking of the night he had planned for Taylor. He took a step from the curb, “Well, come on, the night’s not going to last forever.”
Dodging mopeds, the two crossed onto the famous local pedestrian street. They walked, window-shopped, and a few times, they’d even gone in to browse. An hour later, settling in a booth at the restaurant at the end of the street, Matthew asked, “You’ve never been here, have you?”
“I’ve been quarantined since I was eight, remember?” Taylor was diagnosed with a strange disease that needed constant doctor supervision and she wasn’t cured until recently. Unfortunately, the cure came with lethal side-effects which can manifest at anytime. Taylor got up, “Bathroom?” Matthew pointed at the back of the room but as he did, she fell unconscious.
(~175 words)
I am participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer, where we write a piece between 100 and 150 words (more or less 25 words) in length inspired by the photo prompt above.
What a bummer! She is excited to be on her first date and she goes unconscience! Here is an ending: Matthew kisses her, she wakes up and is forever healed! LOL!
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That’s a romantic ending, like when prince charming kisses snow white. 😀
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Oh, okay! That’s a great ending!
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LoL PJ you are a hopeless romantic! I would have killed her and made the man live in misery all his life regretting taking her out, I am so bad!
Lovely story Yinglan 🙂
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Haha, that’s a wicked ending. 😀 Thank you for reading.
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😈😈😈 muhahahahaha
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Hahaha! You ARE bad!!
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Also, last official date.
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At least, for a while.
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Aww, I hope that’s a temporary side effect, her falling unconscious.
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I hope so too. However, this was a plot I’m testing for a novel and in the novel, it didn’t end well for the girl.
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Sad for Taylor – hope Matthew knows his first aid. It must be hard for teenagers with serious health problem.
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So is he Prince Charming and wakes her with a kiss?
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Hmm, I wonder.
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Not good. Well done.
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Thanks. 🙂
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That’s the problem with cures these days…sometimes, they’re worse than the disease they’re curing! 😛 Great take on this.
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I agree. Thank you for reading.
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